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Old 08-09-2007, 03:01 AM
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Lost and Unforgiven

Here I lay on the floor suffacating in my unforgiven self
dying of misery knowing i messed up
cold abrews when your not here
as i look i see only darkness

suddenly a small thud sounding wall to wall
still suffacating
THUD!Crack!
light spills in the dark room like maple syrup on a pancake

my eyes fill with light of all colors red orange blue
the light forms into a yellow whitish haze
i see walls cracking and falling to the earth
still white....i shut my eyes like its frozen

3...2...1 i opened my eyes
not to see something scary or something else
i find myself staring at the girl i cherrish
and...hugging me reliving me with air and warmth

THE END

i know it ♥♥♥♥♥♥ i just made it
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