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Old 10-08-2007, 10:13 AM
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Kailey Richardson has lived her life normally, with normal friends, normal grades, and a normal life. When a new girl, Daffodil Hayes comes to her school, things get turned upside down. Will Kailey make it through 7th grade?

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The sound of the alarm was both torturous and exciting. Kailey opened her eyes to a new day, her first day of middle school. Her first day of 7th grade. Her new outfit, completely Aeropostale, was laid out on her chair in front of her desk. Her friend Jodie had insisted that the pale pink shirt would "brighten" Kailey's chocolate brown eyes.

She dressed quickly, not wanting to waste time. Everyone in her house was fast asleep. She started school an hour earlier than everyone else, which meant avoiding her younger two twin sisters. She loved them to death but more often than not they were horribly annoying.

She went downstairs and decided on her breakfast, a granola bar and a Granny Smith apple. She ate the apple and put the granola bar in her pocket to eat along the way. Brush teeth, brush hair, get out.

The morning air was brisk and cold, Kailey wished she had brought a sweater, but it was too late now. She was already walking towards the middle school. She could walk to school now, the middle school was much closer to her house. Kailey was brimming with excitement, even though she had to walk to school alone today. Jodie's mother was a stay-at-home mom who loved taking her daughter to school in their Toyota Highlander. Kailey was at Jodie's house yesterday, and Jodie's mom was talking about how exciting middle school was while she shelved groceries.

"Hey, do you go to that middle school down the street too?" asked a voice, dilluted with a British accent.

Kailey stopped and turned around. Then she stared. There was a girl, her age most likely, walking toward her. This girl had blonde hair, it looked almost bleached. She had sweet blue eyes, and a fairly tanned skin tone. She was dressed practically like a hippie. Were those, radish earrings? "Uh...yeah." Kailey finally answered.

"That's good." the hippie girl answered. She stopped, feet away from Kailey. She noticed Kailey's stare. "What?" she asked.

"I uhm, like your earrings." Kailey stammered.

"Thanks. I made them myself." the girl replied. "I'm Daffodil."

Daffodil?! What kind of name is Daffodil?! Kailey thought. "My name's Kailey." Kailey said in monotone.

"That's a nice name. Do you want to walk to school with me? It's my first day. I'm from Hampshire." Daffodil said. "England." she added.

Like I couldn't tell with that accent. Kailey thought rudely. "How do you like America so far?" she asked as she started walking again, Daffodil by her side.

"It's good. A lot like England. No tea time though, Mum's been having it on schedule though, your time zone. She's been calling her friends up at all hours, just so she can find a convenient time for them. The time difference has really got her scrambled." Daffodil explained.

"Why did you move to America?" Kailey asked politely.

"Dad's company moved to the U.S. for more business, to spread out really. It's supposed to be a big success here, that's what they predicted. I'm not sure, it might be a lot of rubbish though. No offense, I just didn't want to leave." Daffodil said.

"What's with the outfit?" as soon as it was out of her mouth, Kailey realized how rude that sounded. "I mean, why do you dress like that?"

"It's for the environment really." Daffodil tugged at her skirt. "This was made of my mum's old curtains. Some people think it's odd, but really saving the world isn't that odd."

"You sound like a superhero." Kailey joked.

Daffodil smiled. "I was going to run for Parliament, but it doesn't look like that's happening now does it? I was thinking of moving back someday. What do you have for government here?"

"Senate." Kailey said lamely. "And the President, of course."

"Right, him." Daffodil wrinkled her nose. "The Prime Minister does mention him from time to time. There's the middle school."

The school loomed above them. Kailey felt smaller and smaller by the minute. Just then, Jodie ran toward her. "Kay, you wore the shirt!" she gave Kailey a huge hug. "There's rumors running around the school some hippie girl from Britain is-" she stopped when she saw Daffodil. "Oh, hi. I'm Jodie. And you are. . ."

"Daffodil." Daffodil answered immediately.

"Right." There was a moment of uncomfortable silence. "Welcome to our neighborhood. . .was Kailey helping you find your way to the school?"

"Yes." Daffodil said. "She was very helpful. Well, I'm going to go to the office to pick up my schedule. See you guys later." Daffodil walked away.

"What a weirdo." Jodie said when Daffodil was out of earshot. "She's just like, 'oh...I'm from Great Britain...'"

"She didn't say anything like that." Kailey said.

"Whatever." Jodie replied. "Lets go, we need to get to our. . ." Jodie squealed. "Lockers!"

Jodie sped ahead of Kailey, turned around, then made a gesture for Kailey to follow. Kailey quickly ran after into the school.

- End of Chapter 1 -

(Disclaimer: Daffodil Hayes is BASED off of Luna Lovegood, but they're not the same. Thank you.)
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not everyone likes Areo-whatever

a an apple and a bar??? NOT BREAKFAST

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NOTHING IS EVER NORMAL

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a an apple and a bar??? NOT BREAKFAST

but other than that it's terrific!
Some things can be normal.

Sure, not everyone likes it, but Kailey does.

And this is my story so I can make her have an apple and a granola bar for breakfast. And it's a totally normal breakfast. I'll be posting Chapter 2 soon everyone.
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Chapter 2


After all the morning classes, Kailey was relieved to get to Lunch. Daffodil was in all of her classes. Even Advanced Math. Jodie wasn't in Advanced Math, because, in Jodie's words, "Math is. . .not fun.". Kailey showed Daffodil to all her classes. The teachers all adored Daffodil's British accent, although Daffodil said, "It will fade eventually, my mum told me."

Lunch came, and Daffodil was still in the Lunch line when Kailey sat down next to Jodie.

"So, you've been hanging out with the. . .Great Britain Girl?" Jodie spat out out the word along with a few chewed up pieces of pasta with meat sauce.

"She's not that bad." Kailey said, stirring around her own serving of pasta.

"She's. . .she's. . .I don't know." Jodie said. "I mean, she's just so. . .she doesn't belong here. She's belongs back in. . .Hampshire."

"What do you have against her?" Kailey looked her friend in the eye.

"Jeez, you're telling me you like that. . .European Environmentalist?" Jodie questioned.

"You say that like it's a bad thing." Kailey replied simply.

"Whatever. Lets just drop it. We're supposed to be best friends Kay. Anyway, she's coming. And of course, she's sitting with us. Perfect." Jodie smiled to Daffodil, sickly sweet, like maple syrup on sugar.

Daffodil met Jodie's gaze, and either chose to ignore it or just didn't know it was fake. She sat down with her salad and low-fat milk.

"Are you on a diet?" Jodie asked, eying Daffodil's lunch.

"I'm a vegetarian." Daffodil explained patiently, as if Jodie were a small child.

"Like I wouldn't have gues- Ouch!" Jodie cried out when Kailey kicked her from under the table.

"What was that?" Daffodil asked.

"Something that really hurt. These tables." Jodie explained bitterly.

"Alright then. . ." Daffodil started eating her salad.

Soon, and after uncomfortable silence at their table, the bell rang and everyone rushed out of the lunch room and to their next class.


The first day of school was over. Kailey walked out, in the middle of Jodie and Daffodil. Jodie ran off to meet her mother's Highlander in the parking lot and Kailey was left with Daffodil.

"Your friend Jodie doesn't like me very much." Daffodil said after awhile.

"Jodie can be a bit difficult sometimes." Kailey explained.

"I don't think she wants me as a friend." Daffodil said.

"She'll warm up to it." Kailey said hopefully.

"Maybe. Maybe not." Daffodil said. "Back in Hampshire one of my friends abandoned me because I became a vegetarian. She said it was too adult and she thought it was rubbish. She was one of my best friends too, so it really hurt."

"Wow." was all Kailey could think to say.

"It's alright now I suppose." Daffodil said. "I mean, life's like rivers. You get people going down all these different ones. Some are strong currents, some meander in different directions, some just go where others have already eroded. They all end up in the same ocean."

Kailey thought about this. She supposed it made sense. This girl had more sense than it looked like she did.

"Well, I have to go back to my house. See you tomorrow Kailey." Daffodil left. Kailey was still thinking about what Daffodil said. She headed back in her house.
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Some things can be normal.

Sure, not everyone likes it, but Kailey does.

And this is my story so I can make her have an apple and a granola bar for breakfast. And it's a totally normal breakfast. I'll be posting Chapter 2 soon everyone.
Most things in here are actually very nice, interesting, and a very good Eco-friendly story, good job sis.
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Chapter 3

The days slipped, gracefully, into a routine. Everyday Daffodil would sit with them at lunch, Jodie would scowl at her lunch, and Kailey would try to be the peacemaker. Kailey supposed that three was company, the saying was right. Jodie, who used to make an effort to be somewhat nice to Daffodil, or at least decently nice, was now getting colder, as the days seemed to be.

Study Hall was one of the classes that all three girls had together.

"Kay, can you help me?" Jodie asked, gazing at her Math homework with distaste.

"You multiply that number," Kailey pointed at a spot on Jodie's paper. "by 7."

"Then what?" Jodie moaned.

"There's nothing else. That's the answer." Daffodil added, looking up from her Science notes.

"I was asking Kailey." Jodie snapped. Daffodil recoiled.

"That was mean." Kailey said.

"Well she interrupted my train of thought!" Jodie replied, rudely.

"It was what I was going to say!" Kailey yelled. The Study Hall teacher gave them a Look. "It was what I was going to say." Kailey said, lowering her voice down to a whisper.

"Yes, well she has that nasally little British accent." Jodie retorted, forgetting, or maybe not forgetting, that Daffodil was right there.

Kailey looked over at Daffodil. The bell rang and Daffodil was the first one out the door. Kailey ran after her, but Jodie called out.

"Kay, what the heck?" Jodie said amongst a sea of people.

"She's my friend too." Kailey replied.

"But I'm your best friend!" Jodie protested.

Kailey turned and quickly walked away, leaving Jodie standing there, mouth agape, not sure what else to say.

Kailey weaved through the crowd. She found Daffodil at her locker, shelving books.

"Hey." Kailey said.

"I knew she hated me." Daffodil mused.

"Jodie is just. . ." Kailey explained.

"Difficult, I know." Daffodil said, her anger suppressing her British accent.

"It's alright." Kailey comforted.

"No it's not. I mean, Jodie really just doesn't like me. And it's totally fine, I know that you guys have been best friends since the beginning of time and all. . ."

Since the beginning of time. Kailey thought. I guess that would be true. Jodie and I go way back. . .but. . .she's changed.

"Well, I got to get to my next class." said Daffodil.

"I'm in your next class." Kailey reminded her.

"Right." Daffodil gave her a weak smile. They walked together to their next class.
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