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Old 06-13-2007, 08:46 AM
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Look and Find

Prologue

Tick Tock… Tick Tock… Ring!!
“Yes! School is out!” I said with great joy.
Thousands of kids ran out of school throwing and ripping papers.
A few nerds were walking out with frowns.
I’m not a nerd though. I’m not really popular though. I was so glad!
I rapidly jumped on the bus and went on home.
My other friends had already left to their vacation. I sat on the boring ride home and watched blue birds fly by. I rested my cheek on my fist. I thought about what summer break would be like.
I finally made it home without home work or anything extra!
I walked in my front door and my dog ran up to me. I scratched his ears with a bright smile on my face. My dad was typing away on his lap top trying to find a good hotel to stay in.
I went into the kitchen and got a glass of milk.
I peered over my dad’s shoulder.
He was looking at a hotel called the Hickory Hollow Inn.
It was located in Hickory Hollow Wood.
It looked like a nice hotel.
It had log outing, an in ground pool, and
Great scenery.
I was so excited!
“Ryan,” dad said “I’ve already loaded up the car.
You want to leave now?”
“Sure dad!” I exclaimed.
I and my dad got into the car and left to Chicago.




This prologue is small compared to the chapters
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Old 06-13-2007, 01:04 PM
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Chapter 1
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We drove up the drive way and down our road. We live in Utah, so it was a long drive there.
I stared out the window looking at the country landscape. I fell asleep slowly as my dad drove to our destination.


~ Several Hours Later ~


“Rocky… Rocky,” My dad said softly. “Huh… we are here,” I said half asleep. I slowly got out of the car. I grabbed a plastic bag with little strength. We walked in the deserted looking hotel. I thought tons of cars would be in the parking lot, but only a few were there. I and my dad walked in the hotel. I sat down as my dad went up to the check in counter. A lady was sitting at the counter chewing gum and righting something down on a sticky note. Her name tag said Hotel Keeper: Jenn. He got the room key from her and then we went to the room. My dad opened the door. Our room had a tall ceiling, its own living room, and a king sized bed! I dropped my bag, ran and jumped on the bed. I laid down and stared at the window searching for what this summer would hold for me. “I’m going to get some ice for the frig,” my dad said.
I went to the living room in front of the plasma TV. I tried to turn it on, but it acted like it was broken.
“Now what am I suppose to do now!” I wined. I searched through the dressers for one of those hotel note pads, but all of the drawers were empty. We had not un packed stuff, but I was to lazy to do dad a favor. I looked around the room for a stool so I could look on top of the shelves. I went into the bathroom. Right next to the sink was what I was looking for. I gently placed the stepping stool next to the shelves. Unfortunately, nothing was there. After I put the stool back into the bathroom, I desperately got on my knees and looked under the bed. There was a book lying under the bed. I reached for the book and pulled it out. I wiped off the dust and read the title.
The title was…
Look and Find

And in small print it said:

Hotel Theme.



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LOL, Thx ^_^

There are better ones at TTC, hard to believe.
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Not... really...
Roxy the Red Cat and Big Bussiness are the biggest writers there 0.0
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Not... really...
Roxy the Red Cat and Big Bussiness are the biggest writers there 0.0
yeah, thats only because of thier 2 hit storys.
Hey, Knuckles, You had a hit story.
The ToonTown Chronicles?
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Old 06-18-2007, 05:37 PM
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yeah, thats only because of thier 2 hit storys.
Hey, Knuckles, You had a hit story.
The ToonTown Chronicles?
Oh, yeah...
That story used to be quiet popular, but I don't do that stuff anymore...
That was fun, though... And goodluck with this story
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