I loved it, especially part 4. No bad comments that time. Continue!

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Thanks :3
I posted part of part 5. (confusing xD)

I was kinda disappointed when I read part 5, cuz I thought it would be longer.

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It isn't a full part. I thought I said that. ^_^ I was bored at it was 12 clock at night,on a school night >.> I had to get off right awayy lol. Sorry
and it wont let me edit it again so I'll post the rest of it in this post.

Part 5.
Kevin jumped out of the car,clutching Tiger. He went through the door and ran upstairs,into his bedroom. He locked the door tightly,then looked at Tiger with a evil grin before putting him down. ''Um...What's with the creepy smile dude?'' Tiger,as soon as he was out of Kevin's grip transformed back into his humanoid form - he had more power like this,in case Kevin tried to do anything. ''Kay',what happened to that kid?'' he mumbled,pinning down Tiger despite the fact he was much smaller than him. ''Nothing...'' Tiger stated,avoiding Kevin's looks,he had that cute little boy face that seemed to see right through you. ''Stop lying.'' Kevin spat onto his face. ''Just tell me.'' Tiger just growled,then got up and pushed the ''That kid tormented you for years. Do you seriously care if I made him into my mindless slave?'' Not waiting for a reply,he blurted out. ''Course' not. Besides he saw to much for me to clear just a mere memory,it was too late.'' He sighed then looked at Kevin again,grinning. ''So what'd you like to do for fun?'' Kevin just stared,mumbling under his breath. ''Stuff...'' Tiger crawled under the bed and grabbed a box. ''What's this?'' Kevin shrugged,grabbing the box and opening it. It was just a board game. He took the board and the dice out. ''Wanna play?'' Tiger just nodded,distracted. He felt a pain in his neck,then a voice in his head. It was a man,and though it was muffled,he could hear a few words. The voice went,and he rolled the die,then started to play snakes & ladders.

''I won!'' Tiger leaped up into the air,cheering. He waited for Kevin to roll the die 5 times to get to the end. Finally,as he won,Kevin smiled,looking at Tiger. They sat down for awhile,talking about Kevin's homework. It was a bunch of maths questions,but easy solvable with the use of a calculator. As they finished,Tiger looked at the clock. They still had a few hours. Tiger was just about to speak when he stopped. Not because he wanted to,but because he had been rendered speechless. It was the voice again,but this time it was clear,too clear...almost like he was talking to him. Must've been from the chip Mr.Unique had planted in him. ''Listen,it was a mistake selling you to that kid. You see it isn't about the money to me,but the entertainment,you get that? Thats why I plant loads of cameras and chips in my pets... He isn't treating you like a object,heck he isn't even treating you like a pet. This isn't good. I rarely get customers,being in a alley and all,and I thought I was in for a treat.'' The voice echoed through Tiger's head,causing him to clutch his ears,he didn't know if he could hear him reply,but his spoke anyway. ''What'd you want Sir?'' Kevin just looked at him,surprised. ''Nothing thanks...Are you insane?'' Tiger ignored Kevin,and listened for more. But he got none. ''Nah I'm not insane. I just wanted to get something for you.'' He lied,biting his tongue in the process. It wasn't like him to lie,but he didn't fancy explaining all these details to the kid,he didn't even know what that meant himself. Other than the fact his old master had a sort of private live-tv show of him or something,and being kind of a jerk,wanted entertainment...

Tiger,after transforming into his lesser form, crawled into his bed. He'd had a busy day. For a second he'd sworn that Kevin was going to kill him or something,and then there was the problem of the Mr.Unique - but that was probably just a threat. He yawned,drifting into a peaceful sleep. Kevin on the otherhand was still awake,after remembering that he didn't do his story homework for English. Oh ♣♣♣♣... Well,There was once a girl who was named Lucy. She enjoy play guitar and fighting her pet dog,Russel. In her spare time she read books. Until one day she mistook a wolf for Russel. She lost the fight and got beat up,the end. He printed out the paper,then grabbed it and put it on the side,jumping into bed. Looking at the clock,he kept his eyes wide open for half an hour before falling asleep... Obviously,they didn't notice a dark figure outside the window.

Bravo! I loved it!

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Part 6

Tiger woke up to the noise of scratching. He jumped out of bed;transformed into his greater form. ''Kevin? Is that you kid?'' He glanced at Kevin's bed,only to find him sleeping soundly. Wow...the kid's a heavy sleeper... Looking around the room,he noticed a figure,but realized it was just his shadow... Just as he was about to settle, he looked at the curtains,realizing something was behind them! He tiptoed over to them and pulled back to curtain. It was a small bat. What if it was one of Unique's servants? Tiger glared at the bat,it was certainly at the very least one of his creations,like himself... Too much intelligence was in his eyes for him to be a mere creature. ''They're coming... He's coming... Run!'' His voice was harsh,yet had a hint of joy in it. Tiger shrugged as the bat left through the window,staring blankly at the moon for a moment. He then let out a scream as he watched the bat fade into the distance. Hopefully his scream woke up the boy,as they needed to chat... Fast. He sighed,then turned around,closing the curtain. ''Hey,you awake?'' He gasped,as he noticed that Kevin wasn't there - but instead was a bloodstained note. Tiger grabbed it,and although it wasn't that clear he could make most of it out. '' Took your 'friend' for training.'' Tiger read,focusing on the smiley face next to it. He sighed,wondering whether he should be bothered saving the kid. It's not like they'd kill him,just train him,experiment and torture him... Not that that'd be better than death. Tiger shook his head and walked out of the door. He quietly walked down the stairs,then transforming into his lesser form to get through the catflap. Kay' dunno why the heck I'm doing this. Good luck anyway inner self. He ran through the streets,and into the town. He felt totally lost,helpless. Although he had powers,he didn't feel powerful. He collapsed near a dumpster,snoozing perhaps too peacefully. Kay' dunno why the heck I'm doing this. Good luck anyway inner self. Tiger yawned,looking up - there was a tomcat standing above him,a real cat. He stood up trying to look as 'normal' as possible. ''Yeah...'' The cat just gave him a odd glance then hissed at him. ''Go away then kid. It's obvious your a housecat.'' Tiger just scrambled. A housecat...

I liked it, but now you're back to the first mistake: going too fast. It was good anyway!

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Sorry I just abandoned this...and the whole forum. >.>
I had/still have loads of homework and aren't as intrested in it as I was when I started,hence the fastness aka I was trying to rush it ^_^
Thanks for all the comments,I'll finish it eventually when I have the spare time,probaly twisting it though.

Its a BIT long

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I like it a lot.

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