The adventures of high school!!!

tubaplayer55 · #1 (**permalink**) 08-19-2007, 01:41 PM

Well lets see i want to write a story but looks like everyone stole all the good topics hmm... well this story is about a girl named Sarah Bekley who just moved to Fortworth (made up name) , New york (Imaginary fortworth is a small town a few miles away from new york city) and she is starting the year at fortworth high as a freshmen in the beggining of the year I'll now post some of Chapter 1

Chapter 1
"Honey remember to check in at the office first" said Kate but lets just call her mom. "Mom for the millionth time I KNOW!"said sarah "Just making sure you haven't forgotten" said mother "Look mom the bus will be hear any minute I have to go!" "GOOD-BYE sarah dear!" mother said as I ran out of the house towards the busstop. I had to wait like 10 minutes for the bus to come there are no other kids where we live just a bunch of elderly folk. Well anyway I got onto the bus and started to search for a seat one kid tryed to trip me and another started whispering to her friend about me. Oh just to clear something up I'm not the prettiest in the world i have very bad acne problems, braces, chubby legs, sort of chubby body, and to top it all off a rat nest on my head. I finally found a seat in the back next to a some girl reading a book. i said "Hi" and she looked up from her book and made a kind of weird sound that sounded like she said "squeak" then she went back to reading. Though when she squeaked i did notice she has glasses, freckles, and pigtails. Kind of a weird mix. But Hey It's highschool. The bus came to a stop in front of a brick, two-story building.

Hope you like it if you do I will post more soon if you don't I won't but please don't comment about any typos i made and i know i wrote stuff like I said but it's hard for me to right any other way because all the books i read go by I said

California_Honey · #2 (**permalink**) 08-19-2007, 06:46 PM

umm,its ok,i think you should make sarah prettier tho,you dont have to its just my opinion

tubaplayer55 · #3 (**permalink**) 08-19-2007, 07:04 PM

California I've noticed some of your other posts about you being so popular at school. Looks don't matter and that is one of the big things about the story im sick of seing stories about pretty girls

rest of chapter 1: I took a deep breathe and walked towards the doors to get off the bus. Another 2 kids tryed to trip me and some bubble gum got stuck to my shoe but I made it to the doors. I got off the bus and looked up at the school and said under my breathe "Wow." It looked like it was out of a movie the sleek bricks and flag pole were beautiful. I started towards the door when i noticed a group of girls laughing at me. I could hear them say "Omg does she even brush her hair... and Has she ever even heard of proactive" I was use to people talking about me like that from middle school so I just walked inside the building. There were kids up against lockers talking and girls flirting. The walls were covered in posters to join clubs and teams. I saw a small sign on the wall just between a chess club poster and a cheerleader tryout form. The sign read "Office 2nd floor next to the chemistry lab" I thought wow that wouldn't be hard to find if I knew where the chemistry lab was. So I made my way up the stairs around a pack of goth kids to the top of the stairs.

tubaplayer55 · #4 (**permalink**) 08-20-2007, 01:11 PM

hope you like the other half of chapter 1

Holly · #5 (**permalink**) 08-20-2007, 01:15 PM

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Originally Posted by tubaplayer55

California I've noticed some of your other posts about you being so popular at school but look around you looks don't matter and that is one of the big things about the story im sick of seeing stories about pretty girls

I think your character is good. More like the average girl instead of Miss Perfection.

tubaplayer55 · #6 (**permalink**) 11-18-2007, 01:08 PM

First part of Chp. 2: My eyes zoomed like an eagle trying to find some sort of sign or something that told me which room the office was. Much to my discomfort there weren't any. So I went to my last resort.... ask a stranger. I ran up to this handsome looking guy on the other side of the hall because he was the only one alone. (Not counting all the girls looking at him) "Hi, do you know where the office is?" I asked politely. He was a bit taken back by me talking to him but he quickly recovered and pointed to an almond colored door.

monkifunk · #7 (**permalink**) 12-21-2007, 05:23 PM

i like it so far!