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Old 07-30-2007, 11:53 PM
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Animal0060 Trapped in Imagination

This is a story about a girl who is sooo addicted to a game that she thinks of it 24/7....then one night she wakes up to find her self trapped in her imaginaton! (this is a real game)

Chapter 1~Babysitting

"Viki! Viki! Come down here and get your breakfast!" "But mom...its 7:00 in the morning...on a saturday! You know I like to sleep in 'till 9!" "Did you already forget you have babysitting from 7:30 until 8, Viki?" "Mommm!" "Viki, you promised her you'd be there!" "Oh, fine." Viki was a 12 year old girl, helping her friend's parents babysit their little borthers and sisters while they went off and did errands. She had no idea why she signed up for the "Babysitter Finder" club. She always thought "Ugh! Why did I sign up for this club in the first place? Oh...yeah...bff leader." "Viki you have 10 minutes to play EverQuest!" said her mom. (We'll just call her Tori) Thanks to their high speed connection, Viki could get to the game in just about 20 seconds. Her character she always played was 'Wingedblossom'...a level 62 Fae Conjuror. She only has 2 charaters. Her other character is 'Layla'....a level 56 Ratonga Warden. She thought "Hey, all my characters are high level, why dont I make a new one?" So she went the the create a character. "Hmmm...what should my race be? Oh, I know! A wood elf!" She customized her character (or in other words changed the look) and then it was time to choose the play she'd live in. This time she chose Qeynos. Now for the final step, choosing her class. She decided to be a Troubador. She skipped the trial and went into the game. The first step she took, she had to leave. "But mom!" "Viki, listen, I didn't make that promise! You did! So you are going to go out there and babysit! Anyways, it's only for 30 minutes." said Tori. Viki grabbed her stuff, and walked out the door. "Honey, wait! You forgot the diapers. They'd come in handy if you run out there!" said Viki's dad. (We'll call him Ray) "Okay..." said Viki. When she arrived, her best friend, Maya, was walking out the door. "Oh! Hey Viki!" "Hey Maya...gotta babysit whos the lil one?" asked Viki. "Lil one? Hah! Your keeping an eye on my brother, Nithanel. Hes 12." said Maya. "Great, I'm watching someone my age?!" said Viki. "Yep. Good luck, he can be a BIG pain sometimes." said Maya. "Ugh. All I brought was diapers, a baby bottel, some little kid games, and a rattle." thought Viki. She walked into the house and laid her bag down by the door. Nithanel was on the floor playing his gameboy. Viki walked around the house a few times, although she knew where everything was. She went into the living room, where Nithanel was, and sat on the couch. She decided to watch TV, but she couldn't find the remote. "Nithanel, wheres the remote?" asked Viki. Nithanel sat up and pointed to where it was and said, "Over there by the video casse-" When he looked at her, he just froze. "Uh, Nithanel? Are you still there?" said Viki. Nithanel popped back into real life and said, "Oh! Yeah..." "Something tells me this is gonna feel longer than just 30 minutes." thought Viki.
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Old 07-30-2007, 11:55 PM
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heh kinda got off topic....I'll find some way to make it fit....
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Old 07-31-2007, 07:06 AM
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Old 07-31-2007, 05:16 PM
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Chapter 2~A Virtual Wonderland

"Viki, Viki wake up." said Nithanel. "I am awake. I'm just daydreaming." said Viki. She dosed back off into her thoughts. "Lure down another gnoll." said Twuble. "Ohkay...but I don't think it'll help at your hp!" said Kaya. (the Wood Elf that Viki made) "Noo! Run!" said Twuble. "Almost...there...and....dead." said Kaya. "Where should we revive?" asked Twuble. "Blackburrow entrance." said Kaya. "We need a healer...those gnolls are lvl 20 and we are 18." said Twubble. "I could get my ratonga." said Kaya. "Erm....a little too high." said Twuble. "Well I could port you back to Antonica...there are too many high lvls for you to walk." said Kaya. "I'll be right back." said Kaya, setting up camp. When she got back to the Select the character page, she got on Layla. "Ok im here." she said and started opening a portal. "Viki....wake up...honey." said Twuble. Viki snapped out of her thoughts. "Oh!" she said. "Bye, Viki." said Nithanel. "Bye." said Maya. Bye Maya, Nithanel." said Viki. Viki heard Maya say somethign to Nithanel, but couldn't understand it. She looked back and saw that Nithanel made a 'Call me' sign. Maya held up her cell phone. Viki quickly walked towards the door.
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Old 08-08-2007, 01:50 PM
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Old 09-28-2007, 07:43 PM
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Omg omg! Sorry! I totally forgopt about this story when school started!

Chapter 3~Too Many Boys

"Soo...you gonna call anythime soon?" asked Maya. "You were serious?" said Viki in shock. "Uh...yeah." said Maya. "Nithanel really likes you...isn't he in your class?" "Yeah...I didn't realize...ugh, now I get to see him everyday..." said Viki. "Yeah...he talks about you every day he gets home from school. Once he even said, 'I think she likes me...'" said Maya. "Pffft! Yea..RIIIIGHT." said Viki in a snottyish tone. -After School- "EWWWWW!!! EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EWWWWWWW!!!!" shouted Viki. She had just pushed Nithanel away from her...he was kissing her. "EWWW!!!" shouted Viki. Then, the boy she REALLY liked ran up in panic and said "What, what, whats wrong Viki???!!!!" "Nithanel....just...kissed me! EWW!" said Viki. "Viki, maybe you should leave for a second." said the guy she liked, Zack. She could hear voices in the distance-- "Now, listen here bub, back off...or esle!" said what sounded like Zack. "O-o-o-okay." said what sounded like Nithanel.
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