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Old 10-13-2008, 01:45 AM
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The Life of Katelynne Joyce

"....And since then, we will not stand alone." Maryanne acted, as she bowed and walked off the stage.
I rolled my eyes as I watched everyone clap for that bobble head.
As you can see, I do not like Maryanne. She's been my enemy since Kindergarden, when she broke my crayons. That's when War War III started.
Marryanne walked over to me and sat down.
"No need to be jealous, I mean your probably used to me beating you, anyways." Marryanne smirked. She tossed her hair and the smell of strawberries filled the air.
"Gosh Marryanne, do you soak your head in strawberry juice every morning?" I smirked back.
"Haha. Very funny. My DAD owns a shampoo company, and I just happen to use it. He makes natural smells, doesn't he? That's probably why we're rich."
"Oh wow. I'm so impressed." I said as sarcasticly as I could. "And I have a question. Why did you sit by me? I mean, I thought we hated each other."
"Of course we hhate each other, duh! I just came over to show you this" She whipped out a purple invitation. It read:

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You are officially invited to my party!
Where: 457 E. Billion Rd.
When: Saturday, at 3:00
Who's invited: Katie, Jackie, Jen, Ella, Lisa, Belle, Jesse, Sandra, Renee', Rachel, Kristi, Joan, and Jamie.
Who's NOT invited: Katelynne Joyce

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Of course.
"So, who cares! Like i'd want to go to your party, I mean, the theme is probably Barnie or Dora."
"Yeah right. There is no theme. It's a pool party, duh!"
"Duh!" I mocked. I hated when she said that word.
"Whatever. Keep the invitation. You can brag about it to your pose' all you want. Just don't show up." She smirked and walked away.

END OF CHAPTER ONE!!!!! Tell me whatcha think! I'm not sure if i'll continue it so tell me if i should, or not!
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Old 10-13-2008, 01:57 PM
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Old 10-13-2008, 02:07 PM
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Old 10-13-2008, 04:01 PM
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Its great. I love it. MORE MORE MORE!!
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Old 10-13-2008, 08:19 PM
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Old 10-13-2008, 09:00 PM
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Old 10-14-2008, 12:39 AM
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Old 10-14-2008, 01:00 AM
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Chapter two
After school, I walked home with my best friend, Bailey.
"Oh no she, di'nt!" Bailey shouted after I told her everything.
"Oh yes she, did!"
"Just ignore her though, she's probably just jealous of your acting." Bailey swept her black bangs aside.
"But the audition went horrible! She got the main lead, and guess what I got?"
"What?"
"I'm the ugly alien that stands in the back. And the worse part is-- the alien is a...... boy."
"Oh my HECK!!"
"Shhh keep it down!" I hissed.
"Well I still think your a better actor than her, even if your the alien."
I sighed.
"Well Cya," Bailey said as she walked across the street to her house, and I walked toward mine. We've been neighbors forever. (ok, not really but it seems like it!).
I walked inside and dropped my backpack on the floor.
"Hey Mom." I walked into the kitchen and got a big whiff of blueberry muffins.
"Hi, honey. How was drama class? Did you get the part that you wanted?"
"I got a part."
"What part did you get?"
"And alien. A boy alien."
"Oh i'm sorry.... Here, this'll make you better." Mom handed me a muffin.
"No thanks. I'm not hungry." I forced a smile and walked to my room. I flopped down on my big fluffy pink bean bag, and grabbed my silver laptop.
I logged in to Yahoo! Messenger.

Katelynne: Hey, U on?

Baibee: Yup.

Katelynne: Should I quit the play?

Baibee: Even tho you didn't get a big part,they still need you. Don't quit, please?

Katelynne: No they don't! I'm gonna still quit. Maryanne's getting on my last nerves. Someday I'm gonna punch that girl.

Baibee: LOL

Katelynne: What's so funny?

Baibee: You're too much of a whimp to punch her, lol.

Katelynne: Yeah.... you're probably right.

Baibee: Well, G2G Mom is calling me.

Katelynne: Ok, bye.

Baibee signed off at 4:00
Katelynne signed off at 4:01


END OF CHAPTER 2!!!
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Old 10-14-2008, 07:37 AM
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When will you have chapter3? Lol.
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Old 10-14-2008, 12:31 PM
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