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Old 03-07-2008, 07:51 PM
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Hunted (Two views)

The man in the armor slowly crept by the old townhouse that lay in the middle of the town. The king had requested him, and pleaded that he not disturb the villagers, but the armor on him kept clanking on each other and it was hard to walk without clanking. " Dang it!" He muttered under his breath as the platebody jabbed his stomach. He saw the courtyard of the castle dead ahead of him. He had finally made it! But there was somebody lurking in the shadows behind him, but he didn't notice.
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I walked behind the man in the armor that was heading for the castle. I didn't know why he was going, but I knew it must not be good. AS he got closer to the castle, I soon realized I wouldn't be able to stay in the shadows much longer.

The man in the armor talked to the guards, and they let him go through the iron gate that surrounded the enourmous castle's grounds. The man opened the door, and walked into the majestic room. The man's name was Geothin. He was visiting the king of Pelran, a land that spread over a continent. " Why am I here again?" The Geothin asked himself as opened the door to the king's room. The moon glimmered through the colored glass windows, making the room semm like a rainbow. Geothin bowed. The king just smiled. " Let's talk business." He said, his face suddenly turning serious.
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Old 03-10-2008, 03:23 PM
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