Adventures of Crystal

Doggie<3er · #1 (**permalink**) 01-31-2008, 01:45 PM

Hi. This is a story I've been writing for awhile. I've just started it and only have 5 chapters right now, one unfinished. But please take to time to read this story that all the kids in my class love!

Chapter 1~ Two New Friends

Living in the forest is as good as it gets when you're with Crystal the animalist. She can talk to animals and revive them, too. Its kind of freaky though. She dies for about 1 minute then comes back to life.
"Renegade!" shouted Crystal. Renegade is Crystsal's brother and also a very close friend. Crystal was adopted by a wolf family when her real family died.
"Renegade! Renegade! Where are you, Renegade!"
"Oh! What was that? Renegade, you better not be playing tricks on me!"
"Whos Renegade?" asked a voice.
"Um..umm Renegade is my brother" She was getting scared.
"Hi,"
"EEEK!"
"Hey, wait!" Crystal ran into a bush and shape shifted into a wolf.
"Grrr!" The boy ran. Crystal shape shifted back to herself.
"Haha!" she laughed. The boy came back.
"Hi, my name is Farid," said the boy.
"Um,I'm Crystal,"
"You want to meet my friend?"
"Uh, sure," It took Farid and Crystal about 37 minutes to find the other friend.
"Here he is, Dustfinger," said Farid.
"Isn't he a little....well....old?" Crystal whispered in Farid's ear.
"Yeah, but hes cool," Farid whispered back.
"Hi, um, my name is Crystal, I'm an animalist, I can talk and shape shfit into animals, its pretty cool." Dustfinger shifted his eyes onto Crystal.
"Cool!" shouted Farid.
"Shhh," said Dustfinger quietly. Thats when it all happened.

Okay, I'll post the next chapter when I get some replies!