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Old 01-19-2008, 05:30 PM
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Hi, my name is Daisy Dee. My real name is Daisy Deelora, but Dee sounds much more better. Anyway, I have a twin sister. A twin sister is someone who looks just like you except she's not you. But we don't look alike at all, so that's why i keep wonderin' why we're called twins. My twin sister is Rosie Ray. Her real name is Rosie Rayerne, but she says Rayerne sounds like a headache medicine, so she just likes Ray.
Mother says we're nothing alike AT ALL. She says Rosie is calm and sweet, and I am bouncing off the walls.
"Well, I am not bouncing all off the walls. Do you see my feet prints on the walls?" I said. She closed her eyes for a second, then opened them and said,
"Girls, today is your first day of kindergarten. I bought matching outfits for you, so lets go upstairs and get ready for school." She said.
We followed her upstairs. We got dressed and ready and came downstairs.
"Daisy, I need up upstairs for a minute!" said Mother. I hiked up the stairs. Then I hiked down the stairs. I am getting a work-out from all this.
Finally, the bus driver pulled up. He said we were as cute as a button.
"Thank You, your looking lovely too." said Rosie in her grace voice.
When we got on the bus, I said,
"Excuse me, we are not buttons. We are human persons." I said, then skipped to the back of the bus, where no one was sitting. I didn't know anyone on the bus except Rosie, and she had already started to make friends with someone called Jamie.
This is gonna be a long day, I thought to myself.


Emerald.Star's Note: This was meant to be a comedy, and will always be meant to be a comedy

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I think you should have Daisy have a nerdish friend and they always get made fun of.....
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I think you should have Daisy have a nerdish friend and they always get made fun of.....

Daisy supposed to be a happy bubbly child @_@

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I slumped in my seat. This day wasn't off to the start I wanted it to be on. The bus was going speedy fast, then came to sharp stop. It was so sharp the bus driver advised us to put on the saftey belts, whatever advised means. Then a girl with curly black hair and snow white skin came on the bus. Her name was Jasmine. She walked to the back of the bus and plopped right next to me. I pointed at her backpack. It had hearts all over it.
"Nice backpack! Wanna see my backpack? It's got butterflies and flowers on it!"
Then I reached under my seat for my new backpack. Mother said to take real good care of it, or else it will get dirty.
"Thank you, and I like yours, too! My name is Jasmine, what's yours?"
"Daisy Deelora. But you can call me Daisy Dee!" I said, all hoppity.
"Daisy Dee? Very...unique!" she said, just as the bus stopped at the school.
There were kids everywhere, and some were really big kids. The school was big, too. Jasmine and I walked around the school looking for Room 5. We finally found it, and Rosie and Jamie had already found front row seats, so Jasmine and I plopped down in the seats next to them. There was a lady writing her name on the board. In big letters, it said:

Mrs. Morganishloopart

I think Mrs. M was enough for me, but knowing Rosie Ray, she would always call her Mrs. Morganishloopart. Finally, everyone came, and she said,
"Hello, children. I'm Mrs. Morganishloopart. But you can call me Mrs. M. for short."


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It's been awhile, but since it's still on the first page i'll write more

Mrs. M passed out blanks pieces of papers and said for us to draw our sibilings. If we didn't have any, we could just draw our family. So I drew Rosie Ray with my new crayons. My mom tells me i'm an artist. Mrs. M came by and said "Nice Picture, Daisy Dee." I looked over at Jasmine and asked "Who are you drawing?" she asked.
She looked at me and answered "I'm drawing my sister, Jamie. Is that Rosie Ray?" she asked, drawing Jamie. I jumped out of my seat.
"YOU TOO ARE SISTERS?! ME AND ROSIE RAY ARE SISTERS TOO!! NOW WE CAN BE BEST FRIENDS!!" I was dancing around her desk when Mrs. M came around and took my hand. Then she walked me back to my seat and told me to hush. I closed my eyes and put my hands on them cause guess what? It still wasn't a good start to the day.
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