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Old 12-02-2007, 09:34 PM
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Wow, High School!

This story is about a girl who has always been teased, has never had a boyfriend, is in the chess club, and who's parents are overprotective

Chapter One

My name is Katie Carlington, and ever since kindergarten, my life hasn't been exactly, let's say, perfect. Today I start high school at Millington High. I'm kind of nervous about it, because I think I'll be teased again. Let me get things straight, I'm in the chess club, I have the worst color hair, it's a mix between red-head and blonde, it's frizzy, I have zits on my forehead, my parents are WAY too over protective, and even though I'm skinny, I get teased because I'm WAY TOO skinny, and to count it all up, I've never had a boyfriend! That's pretty my life. But my sister, Stacy, she's WAY different. She's a cheerleader, she has perfect straight blonde hair, she has NO zits whatsoever, and her boyfriend is THE hottest guy I have ever seen, besides Brad Pitt, I mean.

hope you liked my story so far, there will be more later!!!
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Old 12-15-2007, 01:52 PM
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I got up this morning, feeling pretty lousy. I mean, another school, more teasing, same every year I guess. I changed into some jeans, and a t-shirt. While I was walking to the kitchen, Stacy comes out and hugs me,"Hey Katie! How are you feeling this morning?" I shrugged,"Okay, I guess." She smiled and walked over to the table. I looked at her outfit,"Wow Stace, nice outfit." She flattened out her shirt,"Really? You like it?" I nodded, she was wearing a pink mini skirt and a blue tanktop, she looked, well, gorgeous! She flashed her million dollar smile at me and I just did my zero dollar smile.
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California I always loved how when you write people's attention is always on your writing but this story just isn't the right one for to write because you failed to grasp the emotion within the piece and personally I feel offended for you have tryed to say that you are dork if you look like that and cool if your'e a cheerleader or that is what your story says to me
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California I always loved how when you write people's attention is always on your writing but this story just isn't the right one for to write because you failed to grasp the emotion within the piece and personally I feel offended for you have tryed to say that you are dork if you look like that and cool if your'e a cheerleader or that is what your story says to me
oh.....okay....
im sorry if you feel offended.....
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i thought it was good!! but the first story sounds awfully like a book my aunt julie lent me once. its called "All American Girl" *my aunt lives in america*

it sounds alot like it but.... still good
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i've never read all american girl, is it good?
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yeah its good i think u might like it. its the same writer who wrote that famous book.... i cant remember it now but im sure ill remember it la--- I REMEMBER!!! She's the woman who wrote The Princess Diaries *it has nothing to do with royalty tho*
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yeah its good i think u might like it. its the same writer who wrote that famous book.... i cant remember it now but im sure ill remember it la--- I REMEMBER!!! She's the woman who wrote The Princess Diaries *it has nothing to do with royalty tho*
Meg Cabot you mean?

Princess Diaries and All American Girl. Those are good books
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yeah its good i think u might like it. its the same writer who wrote that famous book.... i cant remember it now but im sure ill remember it la--- I REMEMBER!!! She's the woman who wrote The Princess Diaries *it has nothing to do with royalty tho*
ohhhh im reading the princess diaries, nothing like the movie tho!
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