I'm writing this story because I'm just bored and I thought I should write a good friendship story so here it is.
Note:I'm not adding chapters I'm typing it just like it is.

Hello,my name is Carla and I live in a cabin somewhere in the Virginia forest with my grandparents.One summer's day I was heading to my backyard.My backyard is a beautiful and peaceful stream with several small black stones at the bottom of the small stream.Well,on that very day I had my book with me and I made my way to the creek,but I stopped in my tracks.There right beside the water was a girl about my age who was just sitting there and looking at the water."Hey, what are you doing here?", I asked. The girl was very startled to hear me because she had no idea that I was there and she said,"Oh. I'm very sorry. I didn't know that this was part of your property.I'll leave."That's not what I meant.Do you live here?I don't mind that you're at this creek, I'm glad you like it."Oh, I'm Erica. I'm not from here. I'm from a cabin in the Virginia mountains.My father said we would be coming here for the Summer.I don't have friends but I wished I did.".Carla thought about it.She didn't have any friends either."Well,then.I'm Carla from the house right here and I'd like to be your friend.",she said as she smiled happily at Erica.

~Still Working on my story~

Great story Mapu!

Why, thank you! Even though it's not done lol.

The only thing I can say is space out your words from your piriods.