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Old 11-19-2007, 04:04 PM
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The Diary of the Misunderstood Girl

This story is written in 1st person.
My goal for this story is for you to cry, laugh, and be angry with the girl I am portraying. This is a diary of a girl who has struggles in life it starts out in Pre-K and goes on for the rest of her life. The most Ican tell you about the girl right now is that she loves poetry. Almost every one of these diary entries will have a poem in it. I will try to post another entrie into her diary every week but to keep this story going I need your comments. The rest of this post will be the poem the girl wrote on the front of her diary:


This is the diary of truth and of lies
It will unviel the secrets of my experiences with guys
It will tell my times of good and of bad
And some events that really make me sad
So open up and look within
For you will get to see who really wins
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Old 11-21-2007, 12:49 PM
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Old 12-10-2007, 02:00 PM
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Translation: Girl is 4 years old

Dear Diary,
This one boy in my Preschool Class who is always mean to me tripped me today.
I landed face down in the dirt and he just laughed at me and the other kids laughed too.
I sat there and cried but of course the teachers never cared.
Also, I met this girl with blonde curls and I tried to talk to her but she wouldnt talk back so I left her alone

When I got home I didnt want to endure Timmy and Marshall's torture, so I ran off to my room and wrote this poem:

The one who is only mean,
With a bully gene
Will have complete regret
So do not fret
For they will get twice what they gave to you
And the ones who don't try to help will be punished too

With Love,
Misunderstood girl

Well now let me explain a little more about these stories. For one this is a true story about a close friend of mine and the U's represent scribbles because she told me that when she was little she wrote in little scribbles like on the show Arthur and also where the date is supposed to be is where I wrote her age and also all of her diary entries are in Letter format
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Old 12-10-2007, 05:58 PM
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuu
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Translation:
Today is a very sad and happy day. Today was the last day of Pre- K. I never really had friends here but I will miss this place.
Also diary why today is happy is because today I conquered my fear of heights and went on the big slide and guess what?
IT WAS SO MUCH FUN! I wish I could have gone on it again but we had to leave.
I swear there was a tear in my eye when mommy picked me up after she was finished with her college classes next door.

I did my usual routine when I got home and went to my room to write more poems

Don't be afraid of your fears
For that only brings tears
But stand up to them
For your life they do not condemn

Your Friend,
The Missunderstood Girl
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Translation: Girl in now 5 YEARS OLD!!!!
Dear DIary,
TODAY IS MY B-day! Hooray! Mommy entered me in a contest for a radio station and guess what?
I WON! So for my birthday I had this animal lady come to my house with a whole bunch of animals. It was awesome!
My cousins came over and we raced turtles and Timmy petted a Lizard and I had so much fun looking at the bunnies.
Today was great! Here is my poem for today:

Any animal puprle or green
Any animal nice or mean
Any animal big or small
Any animal short or tall
Is the same as me and you
Because of this they should be
Treated the same as you and me
Your friend,
Misunderstood girl

Authors note: I tried to make this entry look more like a younger kid wrote it.


Extra Note: The poems will get better as the girl gets older
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these are so awesome!!! you could write a book, better yet you should!! i know a ton of people who would read it!! I know i would!!
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