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Old 10-06-2007, 08:23 PM
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Bled Clean, Peices of what I used to know, Shadow of my mind

Bled Clean
Red wing leaves the year,
There are many pieces left to shear,
Cry and hit,
Hiss and spit,
No other can be as cruel and mean,
He seems to be the Evil King,
From some child’s fairytale to life,
Nothing seems to be right,
No sound is left,
But the silence seems to fret,
Oh, gods please help me and everyone,
He seems to be the only one who won,
Tell me what’s wrong with me,
I am suffocating,
Let someone here shine,
Make sure we aren’t going out of our mind,
We have our blood invisible, no one can see,
No can see that we have been bled clean.


Peices of what I used to know
Lie on the floor, sins and lies,
With all these curses and alibis,
Take my heart and mend it,
Look at my life, I live in a tomb in a crypt,
Tattoo my broken heart,
No end from any start,
Beating, beating slowly,
Being stared at so coldly,
As you push me out,
God is starting to scream and shout,
“No! This is not to happen!
Open up and let her in!
She is alone and needs to be loved,
Her family left her and,
No, this is not supposed to happen!
She is doing that she can. “
My father let me go,
My mother hit the road,
Brother died,
Sister cried,
I am in war,
Never to be at rest and always sore,
I must fight for my life,
Fight to survive,
Why can’t we go back to where we once were?
Because there is no cure,
With hearts raising up to a sky so blue,
A black ocean opens up to swallow you,
Cruel and bleak,
Love is what we seek,
Me and all others,
Without fathers or mothers,
Shrieks and cries from down the hall,
We sob, me, him, all,
Please, take us home,
We don’t care if it isn’t Paris or Rome,
Please, take us to a safe haven,
Where there are doves instead of a single raven,
Into pieces of me I had to say no,
Pieces of what I used to know.


Shadow of my mind
The sun of my mask sets away,
As my face gets clouded in gray,
Some light seems to seep through,
All of my lies and all that I rue,
Seem to disappear,
And all that was far, is near,
You seem to awaken me again,
The light chases the dark away like no other can,
The blinds shun away,
Going to you seems to be the only way,
And the sun will shine on your face,
Showing me your smile and grace,
Now I understand the true meaning of a friend,
Now I can see again,
I am no longer crying,
In the shadow of my mind.
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