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Old 06-22-2007, 05:23 PM
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Poetry

I'm not sure if this goes here. I didn't know if I should've posted this in the offtopic forums or not...

Well, I'm a big fan of poetry. That's why my mood is Inspired. I was wondering if anyone else likes to write, too. Here, we could post poems we wrote so we don't have to create a new thread every time we do. Here's a poem I wrote for a friend of mine. Her grandfather commited ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ a week ago.

Grandpa

Hello Grandpa,
How are you today?
I hope you're feeling better,
Something must have been wrong,
Why else would you go away?

Grandpa,
I wish you were still here.
You were someone I loved deeply,
Someone I could hug forever,
Someone who would take away my fear.

Grandpa,
I hope you know I love you,
You'll be in my heart forever,
I miss you alot,
And everyone else misses you, too.

Grandpa,
This is my final goodbye,
I won't be able to see you
Until my own time comes
And I'll be able to fly.

R.I.P. Grandpa BJ
1932-2007

I write alot more than that, and it's usually darkish.

So... Am I alone in this one? Heh.
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Old 06-22-2007, 08:14 PM
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Old 06-23-2007, 08:11 AM
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I like writing poetry. What I usually write is death-related to a point where I can't post it, though.
The poem you wrote was lovely.
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Old 06-23-2007, 11:31 PM
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I like writing poetry. What I usually write is death-related to a point where I can't post it, though.
The poem you wrote was lovely.
Yeah, alot of the poetry I write I can't post, it being really dark and creepy... but, there's some I can post.
Thanks.
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i once wrote this really funny poem about homework that i actually gave to my teacher for an assignment, and it ended in, "so next time you give an assignment, THINK!!!!" He was a cool teacher, though, and just laughed about it.
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Old 08-02-2007, 11:08 AM
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That was really good and sad I wrote a long poem about my granddad since he died but I lost the page so i'll have to make a new one
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